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Scott Smith Voice Talent

Joined: 29 Dec 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008, 13:59 (GMT) Post subject: Character Demo - feedback? |
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My current Character demo - thoughts, feelings, impressions?
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Melba Sibrel Voice Talent - Voice Seeker

Joined: 22 Dec 2004 Posts: 661
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008, 16:06 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Wow. That moves. Nice. You do have lots of voices in there, don't your? However, I was almost distracted by your dense production, to be honest. I would love to hear your many voices a little higher in the mix if you ever re-mix.
Thanks for the listen! It was a pleasure.
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Robert Jadah Voice Talent

Joined: 17 Jun 2005 Posts: 2627
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008, 16:44 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Man, I hate to be a grinch, Scott; but it's a dirty job, and somebody's got to do it.
This is too long by half. After the 55-second mark, it becomes almost show-offy, which is understandable considering your abilities.
But what exactly is the point? A voice seeker looking for an alien-type pirate, for example, isn't going to listen through Connerys, Aussies, Joisey-ites and more in the hope of finding what he needs.
Similarly, game producers aren't looking for impressionists.
For voice sites, I'd suggest you find your character niche (ie, cocky Friend to the Hero, narrator, Evil Villain's Thick Henchman) and structure a short demo with each. Then concoct a short Impersonations Demo, although I've been better served by short (:15 second) clips of the few clonings that I can passably do.
Then, when I see a Jack Bauer posting, for example, I toss only that one in.
Something like this one might help to get your foot in the door at an animation studio. Since I haven't, I can't say for certain. Track down Bob Bergen's posts and recommendations for character demos and take it from there.
Good stuff, by the way. But if a character voicer voices in the forest, does anybody hear it?
Ramble Off!
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Bob Bergen Voice Talent

Joined: 18 Jan 2005 Posts: 224
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008, 22:48 (GMT) Post subject: Re: Character Demo - feedback? |
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| Scott Smith wrote: | | My current Character demo - thoughts, feelings, impressions? |
So, here's the good news. You are quite good!
The bad news? You need a better demo to reflect this!!
You can't call this a character demo. It's more of a dialects/accent demo. Most of your characters are accents and dialects.
If you were in my class, I'd do an exercise with you where I'd ask to hear 3-5 of the characters on your demo. Then I'd ask you to remove the accents or dialects and hear what you come up with. Most people in this situation are stumped because they haven't created characters. They are doing accents and dialects. But a character has personality first. There are layers to their personality. One layer might be an accent or dialect. But that's only a part of who they are.
Vocally you have nice range!!! But if I'm a buyer or agent I need you to bring more originality in your characters to the table.
BB
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Dave DeAndrea Voice Talent - Voice Seeker

Joined: 24 Oct 2007 Posts: 554
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008, 04:58 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Bob Bergen wrote:
| Quote: | | If you were in my class, I'd do an exercise with you where I'd ask to hear 3-5 of the characters on your demo. Then I'd ask you to remove the accents or dialects and hear what you come up with. Most people in this situation are stumped because they haven't created characters. They are doing accents and dialects. But a character has personality first. There are layers to their personality. One layer might be an accent or dialect. But that's only a part of who they are. |
Bob,
I'm sure this bit of insight will prove very beneficial to Scott... and ALL of us who aspire to do great character work, whether for animation or otherwise.
What do we owe you for that gem?
_________________ Dave DeAndrea
Voice Talent
www.davedeandrea.com
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Scott Smith Voice Talent

Joined: 29 Dec 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008, 19:24 (GMT) Post subject: Thanks |
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| Thanks for your feedback everyone, much appreciated. I shall use it to improve my chops.
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Deby Cedars Voice Talent

Joined: 23 Jan 2006 Posts: 1482
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008, 22:19 (GMT) Post subject: |
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I personally did not mind the length, because I was entertained through out. I really liked the tropical clothing jingle with the Jamaican accent. I could see the tie die island dress in the window with the Rastafarian dread locked dude waving me to come into the store....and because of the rasp in the voice...I could even image seeing him lighting up a spiff while watching the American turist (moi) walk out the door.
Deby
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Scott Smith Voice Talent

Joined: 29 Dec 2005 Posts: 12
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008, 22:37 (GMT) Post subject: thanks sistah! |
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| Thanks fo dat.. I'm feelin' iree all over now.. ha-ha. It's part of a spot I built for a radio station in the Caribbean.
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Darren Altman Voice Talent

Joined: 07 Oct 2007 Posts: 53
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008, 12:51 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Very impressive Scott.. good, pacy reads (something I need to do in my reels!), fun production and an awesome ear! I have to agree about the Connery and Aussie accents being a bit pasé, but the New Yorkers are fantastic.... you have mad production skillz too mate!
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