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Zack Arnett
Voice Talent - Voice Seeker



Joined: 15 Oct 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2007, 00:51 (GMT)    Post subject: Z boy's demo is finally here!!!!! Reply with quote

Check out my demo and let me know what you think, if you like it we can be friends on myspace and maybe go fishing some time.

Thanks,

Z boy



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Deby Cedars
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Joined: 23 Jan 2006
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2007, 09:31 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Zack I like your quirky personality. It comes out in the demo because of the scripts you chose. I do think you should post it in Geek forum though, the engineering could be better. I think I'm hearing reflections on the word itch, for example. I'm just learning engineering, and there are others on here that could help you more. Very Happy


Do you ever fish in CT? Are you fresh water guy or a Salt water guy? Just promise me you won't get that fishing hook too close to me when I'm surfing in TX or CA ok, dude? Cool noch cooler



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J.S. Gilbert
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Joined: 09 Nov 2003
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 21, 2007, 22:20 (GMT)    Post subject: what are you trying to accomplish with this. Reply with quote

Z Boy, I have to ask why you made the demo. Is it a marketing tool and if so to whom? If it's just a cute little thing to say hey "I can do some voice stuff and know how to work with sound effects", then I suppose you got what you wanted.

Most of the effects were distracting and right before the last time you said voiceamatic 2000, I said to myself, "If he says Voiceamatic 2000 one more time, I'm going to have to shoot the squirrel out in my yard." Luckily for the squirrel, I have bad eyesight.

Go visit www.voicebank.com, click on agency reels and you will hear what real represented and working talent are using for demos.

Good Luck to you and by the way, there is a large landfill area just outside of Pittsburgh reserved for demos with bad RObin Leech impersonations on them.

--j.s.
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Deby Cedars
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007, 01:36 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not sure it was suppose to be Robin Leach.....but I liked the character voice. There was a plosive in that spot though. That needs to be fixed. Also the promo spot did not sound REAL. It sounded like a Saturday Night Sketch making fun of the real thing. Even if you have not done real work, you need your demo to fool people into thinking that you have Wink

Don't let all this critism get you down. Think of the money you are saving. You could pay a professional to critique your demo, but instead of spending anywhere from $50-$300. Your getting a free critique. Very Happy
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