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Marsha Beasley · **Voice Talent** Joined: 02 Jun 2005 Posts: 5

http://marshabeasley.http://voice123.com.com

Hello, this is Marsha take a listen to my recordings, i have received some good feedback and I thank those who took the time to comment. I have only done jobs in OKC and 2 job from Voice 123 on phone IVR’s.

What changes, enhancements can you share to help me soar in this business.... Smile

You won’t hurt my feelings, I am still learning

Robert Jadah · **Voice Talent** Joined: 17 Jun 2005 Posts: 2627

Marsha:
Took a bit of sleuthing to track down the spots you invited a listen to, but I did and I had.
Firstly, I suggest you take out the list of clients on your V123 site. Makes you look...I don't know....sort of high-school yearbook-y.
Simply cite "dozens of organizations, churches, and charities across the U.S." or something.
Secondly, ditch the Project demo. It is way to shouty and uneven. Trust me.
The Genuine Care spot is the you that will eventually have clients stampeding to your mic. It is lovely, musical, and soothing.
Incidentally, remove the Genuine Care without music demo, since that makes it seem like you don't have much to put up there.
Instead, record some more (short and sweet) demos that reflect the soft, powerful passion you can deliver, and add those to your site.
Excitable shrill just don't do you.
You have a singular, musical sound. Feel the words; smooth it out; be the text.
You'll be fine.
Voice On!
Robert Jadah

Marsha Beasley · **Voice Talent** Joined: 02 Jun 2005 Posts: 5

WOW, thank you so much for your feedback and advise, i will adjust my website now. I will keep you posted on changes based upon the advise i have received. Good thing i have a full time job...LOL.

Thank you!!!