new corporate demo

Glade Gordon · Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008, 15:11 (GMT) Post subject: new corporate demo

This is my first corporate demo. Would love to know if I'm heading in the right direction.. Confused

Melba Sibrel · Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008, 16:27 (GMT) Post subject:

The sound quality is good. But I hear a continual rise and fall in your phrasing that doesn't make sense. Even when your tone and attitude is different, I still hear the same pattern of rise to fall that chops the sentences into unnatural breaks. Can you hear what I'm talking about? Maybe it's just me...but it's jarring.

It's most obvious in the "obtaining quality medications" clip.

Glade Gordon · Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008, 16:36 (GMT) Post subject:

Thanks for your comments Melba. I think you're absolutely right. I've just noticed the consistent "song" throughout. Will fix it..

Philip Banks · Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008, 17:36 (GMT) Post subject:

You're "Voice Overing at people" as opposed to talking to someone. Put the compressor in bybass and tell me what you know that I don't. Hope that makes sense.