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Gary Johnston Talent and/or Voice Producer

Joined: 19 Aug 2006 Posts: 57
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Robert Jadah Talent and/or Voice Producer

Joined: 17 Jun 2005 Posts: 2627
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008, 13:48 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Welcome back, Gary. Pretty nice.
Serious concerns?
For me, I had to play back three times to understand the opening words (turned out to be: "As a human"). If anybody else has the same problem, I'd say that's a major, major potential hiccup.
Could just be me, though.
On the less-enhanced spots, you sound very much like a northern Colin Campbell. Could Deb be using our own Ol' Perfesser as a template?
Vancouver On!
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Diane Havens Talent and/or Voice Producer

Joined: 09 Jun 2006 Posts: 1281
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008, 14:39 (GMT) Post subject: |
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I couldn't understand the opening either -- in fact, I found it jarring. I loved the rest of it. I am so glad to hear these success stories about great voice coaches! People sometimes forget that in the learning process, it takes two to succeed -- a good teacher, yes, but a good student, too! That you are.
_________________ Diane
Veni, Vidi, Voci
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Melba Sibrel Talent and/or Voice Producer - Voice Seeker

Joined: 22 Dec 2004 Posts: 661
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008, 14:46 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Wow. Quite nice for an old radio guy. You've got a good range without resorting to the hear-how-many-dialects-I-can-do game. And you made me laugh...with you not at you, I mean...that's always good.
Mr. J is correct on the opening phrase. At first I thought you said "As a shoe-man" and I thought, "why do I care how fast a cobbler can run? Is this a Nike ad?" But no. You really should fix that. Otherwise, superb.
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Scott Pollak Talent and/or Voice Producer - Voice Seeker

Joined: 05 Mar 2004 Posts: 3828
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008, 16:04 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Hate to be redundant, but yeah, what they said.
Very, very nice stuff here, well done, nice variety, good sound. The one thing you gotta work on, as you know by now, is clarity and enunciation. Besides the "as a shoe-man" garble, I had some trouble easily grabbing onto "donate blood reg-you-lare-lee" (granted, it's a bit of a tongue-twister). And "nothing seems to be going right" seemed all jammed together.
But still, this sounds really good. Very nice demo and you could compete with anyone here on a wide variety of leads. Being a former radio guy myself (and still doing it p/t on weekends) I can empathize with the difficulty of losing all that radio shtick in our delivery. Ya done good.
_________________ Scott R. Pollak
Warm. Real. Natural.
www.voicebyscott.com
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Gary Johnston Talent and/or Voice Producer

Joined: 19 Aug 2006 Posts: 57
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008, 02:26 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Thanks for taking the time to listen everyone. I appreciate and will utilize your suggestions. Since Scott, Melba and Diane all agree with you Robert, I guess I can't blame it on an Eastern vs Western Canadian dialect difference It was actually a cheap marketing ploy to get you to listen multiple times.
Now, as a human, I'm off to find a solution...
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