o.k...here it is....

Randall Bigham · **Voice Talent** Joined: 13 Sep 2006 Posts: 90

this is my "EXTREME" rough draft of a demo. i have to admit i am still a little stuffed up from getting over a cold & some of these voices i do not believe i did my best at.

please feel free to critique & pull apart. Very Happy

Trey Dixon · **Voice Talent** Joined: 01 May 2004 Posts: 12

Nice range. I like your toon voices alot. The more dramatic reads seem to be lacking some which may be contributed to the stuffiness you mentioned. I'd like to hear a revised version when you're at 100%.

Robert Jadah · **Voice Talent** Joined: 17 Jun 2005 Posts: 2627

Randall:
Good. Fine. Great. Super.
That it's a rough draft, I mean.
There's no gain in hearing only platitudes, so let me offer the humble opinion that there is little point in trying to play a violin solo with only two strings on the instrument. Similarly, you simply cannot record properly with clogged pipes.
The non-cartoon narrative stuff just doesn't work. It sounds like you're struggling, either with after-effects or a tone you cannot hold.
The script and all is good - though I wouldn't open with those really, really super cartoon impressions - but I think you either wait 'til you're healthy for the trailer-guy thing, or go with a more natural sound.
Let's hear it then.
I really look forward to it.
Robert Jadah

Randall Bigham · **Voice Talent** Joined: 13 Sep 2006 Posts: 90

thank you for your responses folks! Very Happy

once i am back to 100% i shall update with a newer one. hopefully i shall have some better equipment as well by then, which will add to the upgrade in quality.